Tips on how to refine the film as it is so far.
Small beat changes to the following scenes:
– The muslim nurse should look up at patient 1, then he should sit down. The timing should be offset. Any other areas where offsetting movement timings is possible, it should be done.
– The scene where the wife and child look sad before getting the health plan should be held for a few frames longer because at the moment it is too quick.
– The clipboard that appears when the health plan is mentioned, the smiley face can be changed to look less happy. (danger of looking too positive needs to be mitigated)
– Proposed transition (see previous blog posts) should be implemented
– More small movements to make each scene flow into the next and make the fim in general feel less static can be added. (e.g: family in the last few scenes should move, patient can show a reaction when he recieves flowers)
Aiming to implement some of these changes in time for client delivery.